Thursday, November 29, 2018

Unclean Sneak Preview

I'm finally ready to share more about my next novel, Unclean.  It's the sequel to Hexborn, and it finds Silas and Shiloh in a heap of trouble.  Here is a sneak peek at what is in store for them at the beginning of Unclean.  This excerpt is from the end of the first chapter.  Enjoy!







Notice of Annulment. Silas hoped his grinding teeth were not audible. “And they plan to tell me when?” he managed to ask. “Before or after they clap me in irons?”

“I don’t know,” Kiven admitted. “My visions of your forthcoming doom are not dated for our convenience.”

“I appreciate the warning,” Silas told the Academy’s Master of Farsight. His eyes burned hot. He stared at the paper, irritated that it did not catch flame with the heat of his displeasure. “I feared this was coming when the Patriarch brought back the Cleanliness Laws.” He closed his eyes and opened them again. “I had a month of happiness with her. I suppose that was more than I deserve.”

“It was foolish to fall in love with her, though I can hardly fault your taste. I would not consider this development a positive sign with respect to your long-term safety. Yours or hers,” Kiven pointed out, unnecessarily.

“I know that, Kiven. I’m not an idiot,” Silas snapped. “Esta probably has my shackles already picked out.”

“Well, then, do forgive me for trying to help you,” Kiven retorted, easily affronted as ever.

Silas sighed. “I’m sorry, Kiven. I appreciate your help, truly. Will Shiloh be permitted to return to school, at least?”

Kiven shook his head. “She’s ordered Headmaster Markas to declare her graduated. Her Grace is frightened that the girl’s power grows too great. The thousand acres Shiloh healed in the Frontier, her work containing the fever, her handling of the incident with the Gernish raiders—it’s all fueled the queen’s paranoia. The Patriarch is only too willing to encourage her fear.”

“The Gernish Raiders? She and her men killed a half dozen wandless thieves. It was hardly anything to be frightened of,” Silas protested, throwing his hands into the air. “It was barely even worth notice. And the fever? Was Shiloh supposed to let it spread? Thousands would have died.”

“I know, I know,” Kiven replied. “But the tales are growing in the telling. Shiloh is becoming known as a defender of the common folk. And that won’t do with a weak queen on the throne.”

“Then what is Shiloh to do? Take holy orders and stay on at the monastery at Northgate?” Silas asked. At least there he could see her and know she was reasonably safe. His lips pressed together until they almost disappeared.

Kiven shook his head. “Rumor has it that Patriarch Vinsen has sent some of his priests north to fetch her.”

Silas felt his stomach turn to ice. “To make her join the Elder’s Order? To force her to serve him?” he asked.

Kiven swallowed grimly and placed a hand on Silas’s shoulder. “I’m not certain what the Patriarch intends. But I fear that would be the best of the possible outcomes.”




How do you suppose Shiloh will get them out of their predicament?  I'm afraid you'll have to wait until February 19th to find out--unless, of course, you would like to join the ARC Team.

You can pre-order Unclean now on Amazon Kindle.  And if you haven't gotten around to reading Hexborn yet, it's currently available for only $0.99!




Wednesday, November 28, 2018

Welcome to the WATCH "#RWISA" WRITE Showcase Tour! #RRBC #RRBCWRW @NonnieJules




Today, I'm thrilled to welcome the fearless leader of RWISA and RRBC, Nonnie Jules!  Here is an excerpt from her forthcoming novel, the as yet untitled sequel to Daydream's Daughter/Nightmare's Friend.  Fair warning--it is pretty intense!


EXCERPT FROM THE SEQUEL TO DAYDREAM’S DAUGHTER
(I’ve decided not to preface this piece with any details.  I’d like for the readers to try and “figure” out the direction this piece is going in.  Have fun!)



***

LEEZA

“Are you gonna buy me a drink or, are you just gonna sit there and stare at me?” Leeza asked the stranger at the bar.

“Uh, sure. What are you drinking, pretty lady?” Swirling to and fro, the man gripped the ridges of the bar to keep from falling off the bar stool. “Hey, bartend, give this pretty lady what ‘er she wants and put it on my tab.”

Leeza looked him up and down. Although not bad on the eyes, he didn’t strike her as a man with deep enough pockets to have a “tab” anywhere, but, who was she to judge.

“Vodka on the rocks,” she said, waving her hand at the bartender. When her suitor heard her request, his eyebrows raised.

“Sure you can handle that strong of a drink, pretty lady?” he asked, still teetering.

“That’s not all I can handle.” Her suggestive wink was all the invitation the stranger needed to move a little closer, even though he could barely stand.

“So, what’s your name, pretty lady?” he slurred.

“Anything you want it to be, honey,” she replied.

“Really? Well, I want your name to be Available. So, are you?”

As he sat waiting for her response, he reminded her of a puppy, paws perched on a windowsill, who has just noticed his master’s return home from work.

“You gotta pay to play with me,” she nudged.

“Well, honey, you finish up that there drink of yours, and let’s head up to my room. I’m in town on business and I would love the company of a beautiful woman going by the name Available.”

In one fell swoop, she turned the shot glass up and the vodka was gone, causing the stranger’s eyes to bulge again. He’d never seen a woman down a drink as strong as that before.

Turning away from the bar and grabbing hold of his tie, Leeza lead the way to the elevator of the hotel…the stranger following close behind, like a leashed dog.

“What’s your curfew, pretty lady?”

With doors partially closed, she took her hand and grabbed his penis through his pants.

“I’m a big girl, single with no kids…does that sound like someone with a curfew?” she asked as the beep of the elevator signaled the arrival to their destination.

Stumbling ahead of her, the stranger swiped his key and pushed opened the door. Leeza walked past him, falling backwards onto the bed.

“C’mon over here and let’s finish the party we started downstairs,” she said, kicking off her heels and propping her legs up on the bed...spread-eagle.

Balancing as he walked, the stranger reached the bed with a huge grin plastered across his face.

“C’mere.” Leeza forcefully took him by the tie once again and pulled him on top of her.

“Whoa, filly…what’s your hurry? You said you didn’t have a curfew so why the rush? Don’t you even wanna know my name?” he asked.

“Well, I thought your name was Ready since that’s the way you came across downstairs at the bar.” Leeza was no longer smiling, feeling a bit toyed with, and being toyed with was the one thing she hated most.

“You’re a funny one, aren’t cha?” he chuckled. “Ok, well let’s ‘git to what we came here for! By the way, my real name’s Jim. Now tell me yours…”

“Nothing’s changed,” she whispered in his ear. “I’m still Available.”

Switching off the lamp, she proceeded to undress the both of them by the orange glow of moonlight trickling through the window. This was a typical night for Leeza. Raunchy sex with yet another man she didn’t know, nor cared to. After a while, she just lay there and let him have his way.

Then, just as quickly as it had begun, the party was over…for her, at least. The banging inside her head warned of the onslaught of another massive headache and there was no getting away from it.

She could no longer enjoy herself as the next one started to take over.



CHRISTY

Jim opened his eyes to a blonde pointing a gun in his face. Startled, his eyes scanned the room for the brunette he’d brought back with him the night before, but she was nowhere to be found.

“Give me your wallet!” the blonde demanded.

“Who are you? And, where is Available?” he asked, his eyes still searching.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about and I don’t want to know what you’re talking about, capiche? My name is Christy and I’m not going to ask you again. Give me…your wallet.”

Jim pointed to his clothes that he’d been stripped of the night before, strewn across the floor. “You didn’t ask me the first time,” he said. “My wallet’s in there. Take whatever you want, just get outta my damn room.”

Christy stooped to pick up the pants, throwing them at him; the gun, nor her eyes, ever leaving their target.

“Hey, I don’t take orders from you. Remember that. Now give me everything in there that’s spendable.”

Jim took the cash from his wallet and threw it at her. “Here, this is all I have,” he muttered, anger lacing his tone.

“I saw plastic. I want those, too. And don’t make the mistake again of throwing anything at me,” she warned, raising the gun to remind him who was in charge.

Jim mumbled something, as he gently placed three credit cards on the bed. Christy snatched the cards up and backed slowly towards the door, but her hands had barely touched the doorknob when she heard Jim yell, “Get out, you bitch!”

Closing the door, she calmly walked back over to the bed. She could see the new fear which had quickly taken up residence in his eyes. Smiling, she put the gun to his head and pulled the trigger.

“Don’t you ever call me a bitch again. I told you my name was Christy!”

***


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Sunday, November 25, 2018

Top Five Current Fantasy Television Series

Fantasy readers are often fantasy watchers, and it's never been a better time for televised fantasy. From Marvel to ancient mythology, from Brooklyn to Westeros to the great hereafter, these are my top five current TV fantasies.



 

5. The Runaways (Hulu)


Photo courtesy of Hulu.


Season 1 is, admittedly, way too slow. (Run away, already!) But season 2 promises to start with a bang, and the characters are interesting enough to keep me coming back for more. Also, I can't resist James Marsters being back on my TV again. What can I say? I spent a large swath of my adolescence as ride-or-die for Spike. Unfortunately, one of the cast has just been accused of sexual assault, which throws rather a pall over the upcoming season. It remains to be seen what his future involvement will be in the project.



4. Daredevil (Netflix)


Photo courtesy of Netflix.


Though the second season is a little sub-par, the stellar first and third seasons make this obligatory viewing for anyone into enjoying a good fight between good and evil and the blurred lines that result. The perfect casting of Charlie Cox as Daredevil and Vincent D'Onofrio, along with exciting fight sequences, give the series it's powerful punch. The rest of the ensemble doesn’t disappoint, either. Binge the first season and meet the Devil of Hell's Kitchen.



3. American Gods (Starz)


Photo courtesy of Starz.


Okay, I know season 2 sounds doomed, but season 1 is still worth your attention. The visuals are stunning, the characters vivid. And who can resist Ian McShane pulling the strings and gnawing the scenery, Pablo Schreiber as a leprachaun, or Kristin Chenowith hosting an Easter party with fifty different versions of Jesus?



2. Game of Thrones (HBO)


Photo courtesy of HBO.


Rarely does a film adaptation improve upon the books, but this one is widely viewed as far more enjoyable than the over-stuffed death march of reading the novels. And as the TV series nears its conclusion, with the final novels nowhere in sight, you don't have to worry about being left hanging (unlike some of the characters).


1. The Good Place (NBC, streams on Hulu)


Photo courtesy of NBC.


This one puts the high in high concept. Join a delightful Ted Danson and Kristen Bell for an hilarious take on the afterlife in this fantasy comedy. The casting is sublime and the jokes laugh-out-loud funny. It really is a riot, and the twists are to die for. (See what I did there?)

What are your fave fantasy shows?

Thursday, November 22, 2018

The Indie Author Christmas List

The frenzy of gift buying has begun.  For those of us in the indie author scene, our hearts begin yearning for some things to make our lives as artists and marketers easier and more enjoyable.  So if you need a gift for an author friend, or if you are an author working on your wish list, here are some items and siubscription services that you might consider letting Santa know about this holiday season.


1) Yeti USB Microphone

Whether you are interested in doing online readings of your work, narrating trailers, or starting a podcast, this is a great multi-purpose microphone that is fairly reasaonably priced (around $125) and easy to use.  With video becoming more and more important in book marketing, being able to have decent audio is very helpful.  And it is a beautiful piece of equipment.

2) Canva for Work

Canva is a free online graphic design tool, but the paid version has a lot of bang for the buck.  It allows you to organize your files and brand kit, gives access to a large photo library, allows for instant resizing for different social media formats, allows you to create videos and gifs of your graphics. and will soon offer Twitter and Facebook post scheduling.  You can get an annual subscription for one person for $119.40, which works out to $9.95 per month.

3) Tailwind

If authors want to build a following on Pinterest and Instagram, this is the scheduling service for them.  At $9.99 per month if you pay annually, it allows you to create, schedule, and analyze the performace of pins with ease.  The Chrome plugin means that wherever you are online, scheduling a pin takes only a few clicks. You also have access to "tribes" of pinners in realted areas to help you network and boost each other's content.  You can also do bulk uploads of images for both Pinterest and Instagram, and the Instagram mode suggests the most effective hastags to use and shares your favorite hashtags to save you time.

4) KDP Rocket

KDP Rocket is essentially a research tool for Amazon keywords and categories.  One of the few tools that isn't a subscription service, it costs $97.  It is frequently updated and can be very helpful in seeing what people are actually searching for on Amazon.

5) The Complete Guide to Facebook Advertising by Brian Meert



Unfortunately, we indie authors spend a lot more time marketing than most of us would like.  This book ($19.99 on Kindle) is an extremely helpful overview of both the technical aspects of learning to use Facebook's advertising interface and the design and psychology of Facebook advertising.  It also includes information about using Instagram ads and links to additional content.

6) Vellum

The ultimate book creator's dream software, Vellum is pricy ($249.99 if you want to do both ebook and paperback layouts) and only works on Mac.  But if you have the cash to burn and really want to impress that author you love, getting them Vellum and a MacBook is the way to do it in style.


I am sure there are things writers covet that I am forgetting.  Authors, what is on your ultimate wish list?

Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Hexborn Holiday Sale

With Thanksgiving upon us, Black Friday and Cyber Monday will soon follow. So, I thought it would be fun to put Hexborn on sale, what with all the Kindles and Kindle Fires that will surely be purchased this weekend.  Grab a copy for yourself or a loved one for only 99 cents!  Need convincing?  Read the blurb and excerpt below.  Happy reading!



Blurb


Hexborn. Abomination. Unclean. Young Shiloh knows exactly what she is. She just refuses to let that stop her. Her illness might make her an outcast, but her broken body hides great magical power. And she intends to make the most of it.

Silas, the king’s ruthless fixer, seeks to use that power to preserve the uneasy peace the kingdom has enjoyed since the end of the Siblings’ War. Silas hauls Shiloh from her mountain village to the wizard academy at the king’s court, where magic and political intrigue conspire to create danger around every corner.

Can this child of war save the peace? Or will old sins rise to threaten Shiloh, Silas, and the kingdom of Bryn?

Excerpt


The dust betrayed them.  At the end of a long, dry summer in the Teeth, the hooves of their horses stirred up a cloud that billowed like smoke as they traversed the pass.  Shiloh made out a flash of blue that she reckoned must be Lord Blackmine's crest.  The Lord of the Teeth's men flew a banner with a white horse on a blue field. 

Not that we see it much, given his lordship’s lack of interest in defending his lands and his folk. 

The spots of red up in front she supposed might be Silas Hatch's household livery: a golden hatchet on blood crimson.

At least the man embraces his infamy.

She’d been packed for weeks, waiting.  She could have run.  That is what Brother Edmun had urged her to do, from his deathbed . . . Edmun, who had put her in mortal peril long before he'd learned to love her like a daughter.  

He had let Shiloh read all his letters to the City, the ones in which he’d begged the Hatchet to find a place for her at the Royal Academy.  He had extolled Shiloh’s virtue and her gifts at length, hopeful that his favorite old pupil would have mercy on his beloved young one.  But at the last, Edmun’s fear for her safety had overcome his hopes for her future, and he'd urged the girl to fly away before Hatch’s men came stomping up their mountains.

She had considered it.  As she'd wept into Edmun’s blankets after he'd finally breathed his last, she'd considered it.  As she’d watched his wands crumble to dust as they died with him, she’d considered it.  As she’d prepared him for burial, as she’d put him in the ground, as she had waited for weeks . . .

And, yet, here she stood, waiting patiently for an infamous, ruthless stranger to spirit her away.
As she watched the cloud of dust move ever closer to her home, she considered her choice one last time.  Her options were limited.  No other village would ever accept a hexborn stranger, and a bastard foundling at that.  Her own had only tolerated her because they’d feared to cross Edmun and her father, and because her skills had made her useful.  She was surprised they hadn’t tried to drive her out of town since her men had died. 

If not a village, then where?  Living as a hermit in the woods lacked appeal, not least because her ill health turned every winter into mortal combat.  Besides, the Feralfolk were not exactly fond of her.  She would be easily caught if she ventured any further west, closer to the City.  She had not the money to go abroad, to Estany.

Thus, she waited, and she hoped that all of her work, and all Edmun’s plotting, had not been in vain.  She wondered how the soldiers would react if her village failed to produce her.  

Not well, she thought.

It would serve them right.

***

Before Hatch and his men entered the village of Smoke Valley, there they were: a half-dozen charred skulls on pikes at the edge of the road leading down from the pass, a warning to outlaws to steer clear of the settlement.  He squinted and held out a gloved hand as if feeling for heat.  A muscle in his face twitched.

“Looks like they’re holding their own against the Feralfolk,” Perce observed.  The men grunted with approval after they traced superstitious circles on their foreheads.

“She, not they.  Magic killed them all,” Hatch countered grimly, before prodding his horse to continue past the macabre display.  He heard retching behind him and turned to find Wilar, the young priest sent to replace Edmun, vomiting into the brush. 

Hatch shook his head.  These high country folk are going to walk all over him.  Let’s hope he doesn’t pass out the first time he sees one of them chop the head from a chicken.

“A little girl from the Teeth, all by her lonesome, killed six grown men?” Perce asked skeptically.  “A girl who hasn’t even been to the Academy yet?  Isn’t it more likely this Brother Edmun did them in?”

Hatch fixed his sharp eyes upon his companion.  “That is possible, but as poor as his health has been these last years, I find it unlikely.  The rumors all say the girl killed them.  As to the child’s education, Brother Edmun was the finest sorcerer at the Royal Academy for decades before the war started.  He was the youngest headmaster ever appointed.  She’ll know more walking through the door than many of our most gifted noblemen know when they finish their studies.  You underestimate her at your peril.”

Perce held up his hands in surrender.  “Yes, Uncle.  It’s just . . . it’s a lot to believe.  A hexborn kid that he found in the woods grows up and kills grown Feralfolk without even having a wand to use?”

“She might have used one of his.  Stranger things have happened,” Hatch replied.  “And my source in South Lake has proved reliable in the past.  Evidently, the Feralfolk had just killed her father when the . . . incident . . . occurred.  That is certainly plausible motivation. 

“You’re not old enough to have been in the war.  I saw grieving wizards slaughter entire companies of men after losing a beloved companion on the battlefield; some of them were barely older than this foundling.  Power comes in unlikely packages, and rage can unlock any box you try to hide it in.”

“Where do you suppose she even came from?” Perce asked.

“There are a number of possibilities.  She was born in the last days of the war.  Many of the monks and nuns drafted into the fighting broke their vows in those days.  Of those who bore children from such illicit unions, some abandoned or killed them in the hopes of hiding their guilt.  Some ran off and became Feralfolk along with their offspring,” Silas explained patiently. 

“It is fortunate that the girl was found by someone interested in proving his loyalty.  Had she been raised a Feral, or spirited out of the country by the king’s enemies, she could have become a significant problem for the realm.  A weapon like that, in hostile hands,” Silas concluded, “could be devastating.”

“Do you think she’ll come quietly, Uncle Silas?”

“I think the chances are good.  Edmun claims that she is as devout and patriotic a lass as could be found anywhere.  Even if that is an exaggeration, if she were not clever, Edmun would not have bothered with her.  He never was an easy man to impress.  I doubt he gentled with age,” Silas opined.

“And if she seems like a threat, once we have her in hand?” his nephew asked.

Silas turned his intimidating gaze upon Perce once again.  “Then we shall fulfill our duty to kingdom and crown.  Why do you suppose King Rischar sent me to handle this myself?”
***

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Monday, November 19, 2018

Five Killer Passages from She Dies at the End



Here are five excerpts from my first novel, the award-winning paranormal epic She Dies at the End. All of them deal with issues of life and death, a recurring motif in many vampire novels, including my own.






This first one is about the vision November, my main character, has seen over and over again.

She watched them bury her again.

Four people stand in a garden. The short redhead, an impatient fireplug, has a dusty shovel in his large hands. His wide shoulders stretch his clothes. A tiny teenager with caramel skin stands beside him and places a hand on his arm, her tunic marred by drops of blood. A tall waif stands apart, distraught, shaking; blue tears fall from her eyes, eyes the same shade of electric blue as her hair. Closest to the grave is the bloody businessman: his dark suit stained darker still with blood, his white shirt ruined, his shoes dusty, his designer tie twisted, now turned more noose than accessory.

His face is stone. His eyes scream. His fangs catch the light. A girl is dead because she tried to help him. His girl is dead, just like the ones before.

Her corpse waits patiently, cradled in the gnarled roots of an old tree. Blood has soaked through her blue silk dress. It stains her mouth, covering the blue tinge of death. The businessman bends down and kisses her forehead. He lifts her up, leaps gracefully into the grave, and places her carefully into her resting place. Her dark blue eyes are still open, but she doesn’t look frightened. She looks relieved. He closes them gently, touches her cheek. A drop of blood wells in his eye, rolls down his cheek, falls silently onto her dark hair, evidence of his grief: her killer's grief.


She watched them bury her again.


Excerpt number 2 serves as November's real introduction to the justice of vampires.


“So, just how awful is this going to be?”

“You mean the execution?” Ilyn asked.

“Yes, the execution,” she said, almost laughing. “Not the incredibly awkward conversation in which we are currently engaged.”

“Well, that depends on the method of execution she chooses,” Ilyn explained as they began walking down the hallway, surrounded by a phalanx of bodyguards.

“She gets to pick?”

“That is our tradition if the jury deadlocks. They couldn’t decide between burning at the stake and dismemberment followed by decapitation.”

“Classy.”

The third excerpt shows the aftermath of November's first taste of battle.

You killed someone, she told herself. Then I brained another man with a mace. You killed a man. A boy. I killed a boy.

She began to shake but did her best not to make any noise. Her fairy companion, however, noticed the change in her breathing. “Hey, it’s alright. You did fine. You did better than fine. We all got out alive,” said Willow in an unusually soft tone for her. November nodded but said nothing. “Is it the shock coming out, or are you starting to feel the injuries?” she asked.

“Both. I think, um—I think it’s also just realizing that, ah, I seem to have killed someone,” November admitted in a whisper as the tears began to silently fall. Willow’s unexpected kindness had undone her.

Willow peeked at her. “You know you were totally justified, right? It was self-defense, after all.”

“I know,” November replied, drying her tears on the back of her hand. “I know it wasn’t a crime or immoral or anything. But still . . . it just feels . . . I don’t know how to explain it.”

“The first time is hard, even for us,” Willow confided. “It gets easier. But you don’t want to let it get too easy.”

Danger is always around the corner, as shown in passage number 4.

Her head spun and her arm burned as Ilyn carried her to her bed. “Was the knife poisoned or something? What is going on?” she asked frantically. What scared her most was the wild, desperate look in the king’s eyes.

He knelt beside her and pulled out the knife. It was shining and razor sharp, with a wooden inlay down the center of the blade, rendering it both a stake and a dagger. The panic left him, replaced by the calm born of surviving many crises in his long life. Perhaps he knew that she needed him to be calm.

“It’s not so much poisoned as . . . evil. It has to do with how it’s made, the magic they use, how they make the alloy with silver, how they temper the blade . . .” He hesitated, not going into the gory details of its manufacture or its effect. “A fairy forged knife creates a wound that will only heal if a powerful fairy chooses to heal it. Otherwise, it will inevitably kill its human victim. The wooden inlay is for striking vampires in the heart, of course.”

“So, we have someone heal it in the morning,” November replied, uncomprehending.

He looked so very sad before he hid his feelings behind his customary stoicism.

“You might not last that long. And even if you do,” he continued after a pause, “you might wish you hadn’t . . ."

Finally, a battle to the death begins between two ruthless vampires. Which one will prevail?

Philemon’s attack came quickly. He could no longer check his rage. He allowed his master only a few sips of blood before falling upon him, stake in one hand and silver blade in the other. His angelic features twisted with hatred, and his eyes called a shark to mind. Luka’s instincts alerted him in the nick of time. He pulled away from November, her blood dripping from his mouth, and he managed just barely to evade Philemon’s weapons as he drew his own vicious dagger.

They became a savage blur: Philemon frantic with rage and grief, Luka fighting for his life. November could barely make out which killer was which as they flew across the roof in a manic dance. She rather hoped they both might perish.

For more killer drama, read the whole book on the platform of your choice.  Happy reading!


Friday, November 16, 2018

Welcoming Vashti Q


Today I'm so pleased to be hosting the final stop on Vashti Q's new release tour for Son of the Serpent!  Take it away, Vashti!

Hello and welcome to the last stop on my Virtual Book Tour! Thank you so much for following along. I truly appreciate the support. And a big hug and kiss to the wonderful hosts who welcomed me so graciously to their wonderful blogs. I am very grateful.


Son of the Serpent is a High Fantasy|Paranormal book sprinkled with Horror and Romance. It is aimed at an 18+ audience. The book is written in 1st person POV. There are chapters written in Dracul's voice interspersed by chronicles written in Lilith's (the villain) voice. Today I'm going to share an excerpt from one of the Chronicles of Lilith.








Excerpt: Chronicles of Lilith


As I prepared to leave Shuruppak, rumors about a man named Noah, who claimed to be God’s prophet, came to my attention. According to my human servants, this man said God speaks to him and has told him there shall be a catastrophic event. Every living thing on this planet shall perish, except those beings selected by God Himself.

The servants laughed and took pleasure in ridiculing this man. They called him insane. I, however, have learned throughout the years that there is always some truth to the ramblings of the insane. I would like to see this man, Noah, and listen to his preaching, thus my departure would have to wait.

In the middle of the night I awoke to booming thunder, the likes of which I had not heard since the days I wandered in the wilderness with Gadreel when we first arrived on this planet. I leaped out of my bed and ran to a nearby window. The sky was ominous, with large bitumen-black clouds gathering to form gigantic ones. My superior vision allowed me to see things in the darkness that no other being could. A flash of lightning lit the world white for a moment. Rain began to fall, first tapping on the window and then becoming a rapid succession of beats.

I threw on a garment and ran outside to get a better look. There were still people outdoors, servants slow to finish their tasks for the day and others who came out to see what was happening. They ran for cover as storm clouds spat their loads of water. Sharp droplets of icy-cold water needled my shoulders and back. I shivered under the prickly feeling. The rain came in torrents now. Puddles formed, and the puddles became streams. They grew into rivers. I ran to a nearby tree to take shelter under it.

I hid from the people running and screaming in fear and shifted to my serpent form. The torrent became more intense, and the night grew darker with the bruise of thick, angry clouds. A wall of rain moved over the tree I stood under, and the drops drummed against the canopy. So much water fell from the skies that the sound blurred into one long, whirring tumult.

Many of the people of Shuruppak left their flooded homes and wandered the streets like lost souls. They had never seen a storm of this magnitude. Some had only been familiar with the morning dew. I had seen enough. I spread my wings and took to the sky. Flying had never been more difficult. The rain pelted my wings, while bolts of lightning threaten to spear me as they sliced the air to my left and right.

The earth shook and sent shockwaves rippling through the ground like water, destroying houses in an instant. Fires exploded everywhere, and the smell of smoke twisting through the air between raindrops was acrid on the hot breeze. Regular clatters rang out as structures crumbled apart and fell to the ground. I needed to escape, find shelter, but where could I hide from such devastation? The skies were becoming more and more dangerous. I flew toward the coast, but my wings grew too heavy and sodden to keep me airborne. I fell to the beach.

I looked toward the coastline, wincing and moaning, feeling the pain of my fall. I had been to this beach before, but it looked strangely unfamiliar now, abnormally vast. I thought maybe the darkness of the night was playing tricks on my vision, but then I realized why the beach looked so strange. The surf had drawn back hundreds of miles; the abandoned sand twinkled in the moonlight despite the rain.

I gasped at a black line on the horizon and watched as a colossal wave swept toward me at hundreds of miles per hour—rushing, roaring, angry froth foaming from between its lips. I stared, eyes fixed, as the wave surged in. I knew it was impossible to escape it. Heat had never left my body as fast as it did in this brief moment of realization. The torrent came after me, granting me a few seconds to enjoy breathing the ocean air before it wrapped me in frigid foamy fingers and dragged me to the ocean floor.

I struggled as sand and briny water filled my lungs, causing them to expand and burn. As the wave moved, it pulled me along with it, like it wanted me to witness the devastation it would cause. My death would not be simple or fast, for the powers granted to me by the fruit from the Tree of Life would sustain me. Powers I once cherished now seemed a curse.

As the wave pushed me along, I crashed into debris in the water. Every stab, rip, and fracture my body suffered brought me immense pain. Men, women, and children drowned, their dead bodies floating around me, yet I remained alive.

The giant wave hit Shuruppak. It was nothing like the waves which lap the shore every minute of every day. This was a gigantic wall of water, cold and powerful. It came over land with the power of a volcanic blast. It moved over the city with more ease than a wave over the sand, reducing houses and structures to rubble and killing every living thing.

My broken body filled with water, sand, and debris until the weight of it fixed me to the ocean floor. People, livestock, uprooted trees, and all manner of structures floated past me. The rain continued to pour.

The sky was now hinting at sunrise. Nothing escaped my eyes and ears, but I was immobile. Every inch of my body throbbed with pain, and the cold of the water chilled my bones. As I lay motionless, I watched a large wooden vessel approach. It was the greatest ship I had ever seen. It glided over the water’s surface, throwing its shadow to the sea floor as it sailed past me, turning day to night. I overheard people singing and the roar, moo, bleat, and bray of animals coming from the vessel. Not everyone had perished. Some shall go on, while I remain imprisoned in this watery grave. The weight of the water pressed down on me, crushing me, as the rain increased its depth.

The feeling of drowning never left me. The feeling of panic, unable to take breath, to inflate my lungs. The slow filling of my larynx––gagging, coughing, briny water forcing its way through my nostrils and into my lungs like acid. I would drown and die, and after a moment of peace, the process began again.

A familiar recollection filled the void in my head, spinning memories of Beelzebub lying at the bottom of the Euphrates River bound in chains, disfigured by suffering and hate. Is that also to be my fate? Shall I become a grotesque monster wallowing in fear, self-loathing, and pain? A sharp, loud wail pierced my psyche, and I realized it was I who did the screaming.








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Vashti Quiroz-Vega is a writer of Fantasy, Horror, and Thriller. Since she was a kid she's always had a passion for writing and telling stories. It has always been easier for her to express her thoughts on paper.

She enjoys reading almost as much as she loves to write. Some of her favorite authors are Stephen King, Michael Crichton, Anne Rice, J.R.R. Tolkien, J.K. Rowling and George R. R. Martin.

She enjoys making people feel an array of emotions with her writing. She likes her audience to laugh one moment, cry the next and clench their jaws after that.

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Thursday, November 8, 2018

5 Ways My Vampire Books are Better than Twilight

All of us who've written vampire novels live in the shadow of Twilight.  I cannot deny that those books are page-turners of the first order.  So, what makes She Dies at the End and its sequels better than the Bella and Edward behemoth?  Here are five ways the November Show Series is superior to the Twilight Saga.



1) November doesn't take any nonsense.

My main character doens't put up with any patronizing, controlling nonsense from the vampires she meets. You don't want to love her for who she is, let her make her own decisions, and give her the respect she deserves?  Then she is done with your trifling, immortal self.  And when break-ups happen, she doesn't wallow in self-pity as though her life no longer has any meaning.

2) The stakes are higher.

Instead of spending three books obsessing over when she gets to have sex with a vampire she inexplicably worships, and one book defending her family, November spends her time trying to save the entire world from supernatural, authoritarian tyranny.  And occasionally making out with vampires.

3) The world is more diverse.

There are black people in my books.  There are latino people, Asian people, mixed-race people.  Gay people.  Even, gasp, the occasional bisexual.  Some fairies for good measuere.  Twilight is one heterosexual white person after another, at least on the vampire side of things.  How boring is that?  At least the werewolves liven things up.  Heaven forbid popular culture should look a little more like the real world.

4) Nobody sparkles, and there are no at-home vampire C-sections.

Self-explanatory.

5) The writing is better, and written for adults.

If you don't believe me, here is a sample:

November heard a scuffle begin outside the door. Before she could react, she herself had been flung against the wall, a hand around her throat. As she struggled to breathe, her assailant gloated. 

“Waited on the roof. Came through the window,” crowed a large fairy with bright yellow hair and eyes. “Now we wait for my partners to finish with your guards, and then we’re going to take a little trip. If you scream, I will make you regret it. Understand?”

November nodded, and he released his hold on her neck. She could hear Willow and Pine outside and caught a mental glimpse of their violent struggle. There would be no rescue from that quarter. She was on her own.

“I wish it was daylight,” the fairy whispered right into her ear. “So I could have a taste. Ah, well—there’s always tomorrow.”

November’s thoughts began to race. Her mind flashed back to a lesson from her mother. Once puberty hit, Julia had taught her daughter some basic defensive strategies. It was perhaps the only useful mothering she had ever done. “Make them underestimate you, think you’re not a threat. Then go for the eyes and the groin. Fingernails are good. Car keys are better.” November’s fear crystallized into an icy clarity.

November looked up at the unknown fairy and allowed her mouth to tremble. “Please don’t hurt me,” she whispered, tears beginning to flow.

A moment later, she slumped down to the floor in an apparent faint. As the fairy swore and bent down to check on her, her hand came up with the crucifix of her rosary between her fingers, and she planted it firmly in his left eye as she brought her knee up between his legs.

He began to scream, tearing at his face. November tried to run past him to the door, but he grabbed her ankle and gave it a yank, knocking her to the floor and climbing on top of her. He began to hit her even as her rosary was still sticking out of his eye, landing blows on her ribs and her face as she tried to protect herself with her arms.


“I should kill you, you little whore,” he screamed, but then seemed suddenly to weaken. “What have you done?” he whispered as light suddenly began to pour from his wound. She closed her eyes reflexively as the light grew brighter and brighter; her eyelids glowed red. There was one more scream, and when she opened her eyes, her assailant was gone. Her rosary sat in the middle of an empty floor.

The adrenaline was such that she felt none of her injuries as yet. Her shock held her still for a moment as she sat on the floor, staring at the place her attacker should have been, not comprehending what her eyes were telling her. The sound of screaming out in the parking lot reanimated her; she grabbed her rosary and stood up, having absolutely no idea what she was going to do. Her clarity of mind returned, and she used her ability to peer at what was happening on the other side of the door. Willow seemed to be holding her own, but Pine was in desperate straits, on the ground, his attacker above him.

November finally remembered the case of gear the two knights had loaded into the trunk. Praying that Pine had left the car unlocked, she took a deep breath and ran as fast as she could to the car. Relieved to find the car open, she popped the trunk, pulled out the shovels, and opened the case.

Carefully cradled in foam sat a variety of silver weapons with leather-wrapped handles along with a couple of firearms. Having no idea how to aim and shoot, she grabbed a silver-tipped mace and placed a coil of silver chain over her shoulder. She began to move toward Pine. His attacker had his back to November, and she hoped he was too engrossed in enjoying his imminent victory to notice a weak little human. He turned to look at her just as she got close enough to strike, and she hit him full in the face with all her weight behind the blow.

The painful shock to her arm and shoulders caused her to drop the heavy mace, but she was still able to throw the chain over her enemy while he was on the ground, clutching his head and recovering from her assault. The injured fairy’s cry distracted his remaining partner-in-crime just enough for Willow to get the upper hand. She sliced into her opponent’s neck, and at the instant his head was separated from his body, he turned to a flash of light. Willow placed her hands on her thighs, bent over with exertion, and assessed the scene with a few efficient glances before she began issuing orders.

“November, move everything currently in the trunk to the floor in the rear. Then help Pine get in the back seat. Start the car and sit in the front passenger side. Understand?”

“Yes, ma’am,” November replied, moving quickly to do her part. As she did, Willow secured the surviving assailant and tossed him in the trunk.

The fairy then turned her attention to the crowd of witnesses who were watching from the entrance to the store. She enthralled them into forgetting it all and tampered with the surveillance system, moving quickly enough to be practically invisible. They sped away and were already halfway up the on-ramp by the time they heard sirens approaching the gas station.

I challenge you to read She Dies at the End and decide for yourself.  Is it better than Twilight?




Monday, November 5, 2018

A Gallary of Characters in Unclean

You could call this something of a collage of some of the main characters in my Hexborn sequel, currently in revisions.  I wanted to give you a preview of some of the people you will be cheering for and against.  I found these images when looking for material to use in the upcoming book trailer, and I hope they will give you a taste of what is to come.


Here we have a new version of Shiloh.  As you can see, she is dressed in the purple of the Unclean and is loaded for bear.



Silas, aka "the Hatchet."  He is not happy with recent developments, and someone is going to pay.



Brother Fenroh Templeborn, son of the Patriarch of the Church.  Ambitious and cruel, he and Silas have an unpleasant history.  Fenroh also has a dangerous amount of interest in Shiloh and her abilities.



Esta, the new queen.  Let's just say that the crown does not improve her personality.



Westan of Gerne, Esta's new husband.  Vain, greedy, stupid, and impatient.



Keegan, Chief of the Feralfolk and Shiloh's birthfather.  He is determined to earn her trust no matter what it takes.




Daved, Lord of the Wood.  Will his love for Shiloh continue to burn bright?



Who are some of the other characters in Hexborn that you hope to see again in the sequel?


Thursday, November 1, 2018

Chapter 1 of Hexborn

It's been a while since I've posted an excerpt from Hexborn, the sword and sorcery novel I published this past July. Today I've decided to share the entire first chapter.  I do hope it will intrigue enough for you to go grab the rest of it.





Chapter 1
Our Duty to Kingdom and Crown


The dust betrayed them.  At the end of a long, dry summer in the Teeth, the hooves of their horses stirred up a cloud that billowed like smoke as they traversed the pass.  Shiloh made out a flash of blue that she reckoned must be Lord Blackmine's crest.  The Lord of the Teeth's men flew a banner with a white horse on a blue field. 

Not that we see it much, given his lordship’s lack of interest in defending his lands and his folk. 

The spots of red up in front she supposed might be Silas Hatch's household livery: a golden hatchet on blood crimson.

At least the man embraces his infamy.

She’d been packed for weeks, waiting.  She could have run.  That is what Brother Edmun had urged her to do, from his deathbed . . . Edmun, who had put her in mortal peril long before he'd learned to love her like a daughter.  

He had let Shiloh read all his letters to the City, the ones in which he’d begged the Hatchet to find a place for her at the Royal Academy.  He had extolled Shiloh’s virtue and her gifts at length, hopeful that his favorite old pupil would have mercy on his beloved young one.  But at the last, Edmun’s fear for her safety had overcome his hopes for her future, and he'd urged the girl to fly away before Hatch’s men came stomping up their mountains.

She had considered it.  As she'd wept into Edmun’s blankets after he'd finally breathed his last, she'd considered it.  As she’d watched his wands crumble to dust as they died with him, she’d considered it.  As she’d prepared him for burial, as she’d put him in the ground, as she had waited for weeks . . .
And, yet, here she stood, waiting patiently for an infamous, ruthless stranger to spirit her away.
As she watched the cloud of dust move ever closer to her home, she considered her choice one last time.  Her options were limited.  No other village would ever accept a hexborn stranger, and a bastard foundling at that.  Her own had only tolerated her because they’d feared to cross Edmun and her father, and because her skills had made her useful.  She was surprised they hadn’t tried to drive her out of town since her men had died. 

If not a village, then where?  Living as a hermit in the woods lacked appeal, not least because her ill health turned every winter into mortal combat.  Besides, the Feralfolk were not exactly fond of her.  She would be easily caught if she ventured any further west, closer to the City.  She had not the money to go abroad, to Estany.

Thus, she waited, and she hoped that all of her work, and all Edmun’s plotting, had not been in vain.  She wondered how the soldiers would react if her village failed to produce her.  

Not well, she thought.

It would serve them right.

***

Before Hatch and his men entered the village of Smoke Valley, there they were: a half-dozen charred skulls on pikes at the edge of the road leading down from the pass, a warning to outlaws to steer clear of the settlement.  He squinted and held out a gloved hand as if feeling for heat.  A muscle in his face twitched.

“Looks like they’re holding their own against the Feralfolk,” Perce observed.  The men grunted with approval after they traced superstitious circles on their foreheads.

“She, not they.  Magic killed them all,” Hatch countered grimly, before prodding his horse to continue past the macabre display.  He heard retching behind him and turned to find Wilar, the young priest sent to replace Edmun, vomiting into the brush. 

Hatch shook his head.  These high country folk are going to walk all over him.  Let’s hope he doesn’t pass out the first time he sees one of them chop the head from a chicken.

“A little girl from the Teeth, all by her lonesome, killed six grown men?” Perce asked skeptically.  “A girl who hasn’t even been to the Academy yet?  Isn’t it more likely this Brother Edmun did them in?”

Hatch fixed his sharp eyes upon his companion.  “That is possible, but as poor as his health has been these last years, I find it unlikely.  The rumors all say the girl killed them.  As to the child’s education, Brother Edmun was the finest sorcerer at the Royal Academy for decades before the war started.  He was the youngest headmaster ever appointed.  She’ll know more walking through the door than many of our most gifted noblemen know when they finish their studies.  You underestimate her at your peril.”

Perce held up his hands in surrender.  “Yes, Uncle.  It’s just . . . it’s a lot to believe.  A hexborn kid that he found in the woods grows up and kills grown Feralfolk without even having a wand to use?”

“She might have used one of his.  Stranger things have happened,” Hatch replied.  “And my source in South Lake has proved reliable in the past.  Evidently, the Feralfolk had just killed her father when the . . . incident . . . occurred.  That is certainly plausible motivation. 

“You’re not old enough to have been in the war.  I saw grieving wizards slaughter entire companies of men after losing a beloved companion on the battlefield; some of them were barely older than this foundling.  Power comes in unlikely packages, and rage can unlock any box you try to hide it in.”

“Where do you suppose she even came from?” Perce asked.

“There are a number of possibilities.  She was born in the last days of the war.  Many of the monks and nuns drafted into the fighting broke their vows in those days.  Of those who bore children from such illicit unions, some abandoned or killed them in the hopes of hiding their guilt.  Some ran off and became Feralfolk along with their offspring,” Silas explained patiently. 

“It is fortunate that the girl was found by someone interested in proving his loyalty.  Had she been raised a Feral, or spirited out of the country by the king’s enemies, she could have become a significant problem for the realm.  A weapon like that, in hostile hands,” Silas concluded, “could be devastating.”

“Do you think she’ll come quietly, Uncle Silas?”

“I think the chances are good.  Edmun claims that she is as devout and patriotic a lass as could be found anywhere.  Even if that is an exaggeration, if she were not clever, Edmun would not have bothered with her.  He never was an easy man to impress.  I doubt he gentled with age,” Silas opined.

“And if she seems like a threat, once we have her in hand?” his nephew asked.

Silas turned his intimidating gaze upon Perce once again.  “Then we shall fulfill our duty to kingdom and crown.  Why do you suppose King Rischar sent me to handle this myself?”

***

For an object of near universal fear and loathing, Shiloh found Silas Hatch to be rather unremarkable in appearance.  Average in height and build, he was blessed with unblemished skin of warm bronze and a full head of curly, dark hair.  His eyes were his most striking feature; green and sharp, they gave the impression of missing nothing.  His clothing, all black as befit a barrister, was well-made and showed no signs of wear.  His boots looked fine enough to provoke envy in a lord.  The king’s patronage was, evidently, lucrative. 

The king’s man was accompanied by about three dozen soldiers, a nervous young priest in robes of brown, and a young man dressed in City clothes.  Shiloh assumed he was another courtier or an assistant of some sort.  He had a pampered air about him, and a rather punchable face, she thought.

“My name is Silas Hatch.  I am here, in the service of the king, to collect a girl named Shiloh Teethborn,” the king’s man cried, projecting his voice to be heard by the entire crowd. 

Shiloh had thought she’d been prepared to hear those words, but her breath still caught anxiously at the sound of them.  Hatch’s voice was deep as a mineshaft and promised twice the danger.

The townsfolk gathered in the square said nothing, even surrounded as they were by dozens of armed men.  They might have spit and cast signs every time Shiloh walked by, and called her a freak under their breaths on the daily, but she was their freak, and they weren’t going to rat her out to some rich courtier from the City if they could help it.

“The girl will not be harmed,” Hatch assured them, seemingly misreading their spiteful reluctance as actual concern.  “She has been offered a place at the Royal Academy of Mages.  It is a tremendous honor to be thus invited into royal service.”

Still, they said nothing.

“If we cannot locate her, I will order these men to start burning down houses after they tear them apart looking for her,” Hatch warned, changing tack.  “I would rather not be forced to do you harm.”

“That won’t be necessary, my lord.  I am ready to go,” Shiloh replied, stepping out of a shadow next to the Temple, her bag on her shoulder.  Her neighbors all traced circles on their foreheads.  Their relief at her timely appearance on this particular occasion was, nevertheless, obvious.

Hatch eyed her appraisingly, lingering on her hook.  “I am not a lord.  I am but a simple barrister, blessed to be in the king’s service,” he replied before demanding, “Show me your eyes.”

She obeyed, stepping into the light and pushing back her hood to reveal the unnaturally colored eyes that were one of the hallmarks of her condition.  She squinted in the bright sunlight, her pink irises glowing.  Finally, he nodded, seemingly satisfied as to her identity.   

“Good.  We shall leave immediately.  I want to make our last camp before dark.” 

His gaze fell upon the steel hook that served as Shiloh’s left hand. 

“First, I shall need to take your weapon,” he added. 

“Well, master barrister, this isn’t a weapon.  It’s my hand,” she calmly replied.

“Nevertheless,” Hatch countered, implacable, but his eyes betrayed some sympathy.

Shiloh pressed her lips together until they nearly disappeared.  Wordlessly, she turned and began stalking off toward the trees.

“Where do you think you’re going?” Hatch demanded.

Shiloh wheeled on him with a glare that could have cut his throat.  “I don’t know how they behave in the City, but here in the hills, a woman does not disrobe in public.  I will return presently.  You need not fear.” 

She straightened her back, lifted her chin, and strode quickly away.  A few of the townspeople snickered.

“If you run, they will be punished, and so will you be,” Hatch warned loudly.  She made no reply.

***

Silas Hatch waited for the girl to return, his eyes never leaving the spot where she’d crossed into the forest.  He was not a man to take chances.  He didn’t want anything even resembling a weapon on her person, just in case she decided that she liked him about as much as she liked Feralfolk. 

He looked over the crowd of villagers.  Typical of the Teeth, the child’s neighbors were a sullen and suspicious bunch, most of the children lacking shoes, along with a fair number of the adults.  Prosperity in the rest of the kingdom of Bryn never quite managed to make it up into the mountains.

 It doesn’t help that Lord Blackmine has barely set foot above a thousand feet of elevation since King Rischar made him Lord of the Teeth. 

It was hard for him to picture Edmun living in this sad place.  After all, the priest had been a royal bastard, one of old King Jerroh’s many illegitimate spawn.  He’d grown up serving at court, surrounded by wealth and education, rising by virtue of his genius to become headmaster of the Academy.  Then the war had come . . .

Silas knew that Edmun had been lucky he’d even kept his head, probably because no one had been brave enough to climb the Teeth to take it . . . But to think of him here, with only one student to occupy his brilliant mind, spending his final years literally out in the cold, leading peasants in worship and mediating disputes between shepherds . . . It was appalling.

Silas was curious about the girl who had earned his old mentor’s respect.  Elder and Babe above, they’d all been terrified of him in their school days.  During the war, Silas had thought the man might’ve been made of stone.  And yet, it seemed he had adored this girl, if his letters could be trusted.

Silas felt a twinge of pity.  Whether it was for Edmun or for the girl, he couldn’t say.

I do hope I won’t have to kill her.

***

Muttering curses, covering her humiliated tears with whispered words of rage, Shiloh's hand shook as she undid the hooks holding her jacket closed beneath her heavy cloak.  Cold weather came early to the Teeth, and she was accordingly dressed for a winter journey.  Beneath her quilted leather jacket was a sweater of wool, and beneath that a tunic of embroidered linen that fell to her knees.  They did not wear corsets in the Teeth; corsets were a vanity for the irreligious of the flatlands. 

Her skirt was calf-length, as was the mountain custom, the better to keep it out of the snow and mud.  She wore wool leggings beneath, attached to a garter, and knee-high boots.  Her boots were starting to look worn, but they were sturdy and whole and would make it through the winter. 

Everything she wore was dark in color: warm browns, deep greens, rich blues.  Only small children were permitted rowdy reds, yellows, and pastels.  No one dressed in purple, of course.  The only thing she wore that caught the light was the hook that served as her left hand.

A curl of pale pink hair fell in front of her eyes, and she tucked it impatiently back behind her ear.  Like all the women she knew, she covered her hair year-round when outside the home, most often with a hood, but sometimes with a scarf in warm weather.

The leather straps that held her prosthesis buckled beneath her sweater and over her linen, looped beneath the opposite arm, and crossed her upper back before moving down her half-formed left arm, which ended a few inches below the elbow.  Her father had taken great pride in crafting her false limbs as she’d grown, experimenting with different materials and different shapes of hooks, always seeking beauty and improvement.  She smiled through her tears, thinking of him.

Shiloh wiped her running nose and then pulled back on her sweater and jacket.  She folded the left sleeves and used her teeth to place a long pin to hold them neatly in place, so they wouldn't drag along, empty and forlorn.  She pulled her warm cloak back around her, as if its bulk could protect her from feeling small, and she walked back to the man who held her life in his hands.

She shoved her hook toward Hatch, looking determinedly past his left ear.  Her eyes were dry; her expression revealed nothing, but she could not hide the red nose that betrayed her earlier tears.

Hatch cleared his throat.  “I will take care with it,” he assured her.  “Do you have any other weapons?” he asked.

Shiloh bent down to pull a knife from her boot and handed it over.  A sling and a bag of round pebbles followed from her pocket.  Then came a set of knitting needles and a small roll of wool yarn.  Laughter rippled through the crowd.

“Is your terror of me now alleviated, Master?” she asked softly.  She heard chuckles behind her back.

“You ought to learn to mind your tongue,” one of the men retorted, “before I decide to tan your hide.  Maybe you ought to concentrate on praying that Master Hatch doesn’t lock you in the High Tower for the rest of your miserable life.”

“That is sufficient, Perce,” Hatch scolded the young man, his tone and eyes both ice cold.  He glanced at the now muttering villagers.  “Let's get moving.  Captain Pike, you may start setting up your garrison on the edge of town.  Brother Wilar, the village of Smoke Valley is now yours to govern.  Their loyalty to lord, crown, and the Holy Family is now your responsibility.  The king is counting on you both.”

The captain nodded smartly.  The priest squared his narrow shoulders and tried to look resolute.

“A garrison?  We'd be glad of some protection from the Feralfolk; Gods know we've lost souls to them enough, but our town is too poor to house and feed a whole garrison,” a village elder protested. 

 “Winter is on the way.  There's been a drought.  A few men, sure, but three dozen?  We’ll starve.”
Hatch shook his head almost sympathetically.  “The orders come from the Earl of Blackmine and from your king.  It is out of my hands.”  The villagers shuffled anxiously, eying the men and grabbing hold of their daughters.

“You may wish to buy some furs from them before we leave, sir,” Shiloh advised softly.  “It's going to snow tomorrow, and none of you look to be dressed for it.”

“Are ya daft, girlie?” one of the guards asked.  “It's barely autumn.”

Shiloh held Hatch’s eyes but said nothing more.  If he chose not to believe her, it was his funeral.

Hatch sighed.  “All right, Miss Teethborn, tell me with whom I must haggle.”

***

Hatch knelt to help Shiloh mount his horse.  She didn’t weigh more than a bundle of twigs.  At least she had decent shoes, and her skirt was loose enough to accommodate her riding astride.  Her father had been a smith with a reputation for skill and fair dealing, according to one of his sources.  She’d have been more financially comfortable than her neighbors, he supposed. 

He could feel her tension when he swung his leg over to settle behind her.  Frightened and brave.  To his surprise, she didn’t turn around once as they left her home behind them.  Perhaps she had already said her goodbyes.  Perhaps there was no one left to whom she would wish to say them.

Silas thought back to the day he’d left his own home behind, headed for the City.  He’d been thrilled to leave the monastery to make his fortune at court.  He’d felt some fear as well, of course, and some shame for his poverty.  But watching that dock fade into the distance had been one of the happiest moments of his life.

A drop of water fell onto one of Hatch’s leather gloves.  He looked up, searching for clouds in the clear blue sky, then realized that the splash had been a silent tear from his passenger.  He considered offering some words of comfort, but he decided that she might not welcome such an acknowledgment.  She didn’t strike him as the kind of girl who would wish to show weakness to a stranger.  Perhaps she hadn’t yet realized that tears could be a woman’s weapon.

She remained silent as they made their way.  Whether this was Edmun’s influence, her own turn of mind, or pain at her departure, Silas could not say.  He wondered how she would adapt to the girls at court, with their ceaseless chatter and ringing laughter. 

Of course, they may well not deign to speak to her.  If she is lucky, she’ll be novel enough to gain a little popularity, at least among the bastards and the lesser gentry.  The lords know courtiers are prone to boredom, having so little actual work to do. 

He did not imagine that the king’s new wife would be interested in having an Unclean maid in waiting, and one unskilled in the entertainments of court at that. 

We’ll have to find something for her to do when she isn’t at study.  Perhaps one of the tutors can use her help with something.  She is probably a diligent worker, given how demanding a master Edmun always was.  The library can always use some tending, or the Temple, or the gardens.  Assuming she is physically strong enough for such work.

Now, her health or lack thereof . . . that was a topic of great interest to Hatch.  As a student of dark magic, and a creature with a naturally morbid temperament, he had read a great deal about the effect a mother’s curses could have on an unborn child.  He’d had occasion, over the years, to examine a few such unfortunate children; unhappily, they had already died before he’d gotten his hands on them. 

The autopsies had proved less enlightening than he had hoped.  Two of them had been born dead, or so the mothers had plausibly claimed at trial.  The third had obviously been strangled in the family’s unsuccessful effort to hide his birth.  They’d hanged the mother at a crossroads, as he recalled.

He’d only met a live one once, during his years abroad, where they were not so fussy about such accidents.  The girl’s parents had been disinclined to allow him to examine the child in detail, alas.  All of the specimens had shared hair and eyes of bright colors along with significant anatomical abnormalities.  The live one had also possessed an accumulation of scars.

Hatch had pressed Edmun for details about Shiloh’s condition, to little avail.  The priest had admitted that the child had suffered from bouts of affliction from time to time, illnesses whose symptoms matched the results of certain hexes that had been popular during the war.  However, Edmun had offered little beyond the fact that the girl had come close to death on more than one occasion.   

She should present a fascinating case study, when the time comes. 

Assuming, of course, that no misfortune intervenes.

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